Between Tent Flaps

Friends Short Stories · approx. 10 min read · 18+

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The air inside the tent was thick enough to cut as Jonas pulled the zipper of the entrance shut behind him. Outside, rain pelted against the tent fabric, a steady drumming that swallowed every other conversation from the campfire. Lea sat on her sleeping mat, knees drawn up, pulling the thin blanket tighter around her shoulders. Her hair was wet, and a few drops ran down her neck.

“This is going to last for hours,” he said, dropping onto his own mat, which lay barely an arm’s length from hers. The distance between them felt greater than it was.

Lea shrugged. “Then we’re stuck here. Could be worse.”

He watched her fingers grip the edge of the blanket, remembering how they had laughed by the fire an hour ago, how her hand had lightly touched his shoulder when she offered him the last sip from her bottle. That was before the rain, before the hasty takedown, the scurrying to the tent. Now there was only the sound of the water and the soft rustle of clothing.

“You’re shivering,” he observed.

She laughed softly. “I didn’t think it would get this cold at night. My sleeping bag is in the car.”

“I have mine here.” He reached behind him and pulled out the thick, down-filled sleeping bag. “Take it. I’ll be fine.”

“And you?”

“I have the blanket. And my sweatshirt is thick.”

She hesitated, then shook her head. “Then we’ll both freeze. Let’s share the sleeping bag. It’s wide enough.”

His heart skipped a beat when he heard the words. He tried not to show it, just nodded and unzipped the sleeping bag. The down puffed out, soft and inviting. She crawled closer, her movements hesitant, then settled down beside him. The blanket stayed over her legs while he pulled the sleeping bag over both of them.

The confined space changed everything. Their knees touched, their shoulders, the warmth of her body seeping through the fabric of their clothes. He felt her breath on his cheek as she turned onto her side to look at his face.

“This is better,” she whispered.

He nodded. His hand lay between them, and he didn’t dare move it. Then he felt her fingers wrapping around his. The touch was light, almost questioning.

“Jonas,” she said softly. “Tonight I already wondered whether I should drive here with you. Whether it’s a good idea.”

“And now?”

She pulled his hand closer, placed it on her hip. Just like that. Her eyes held him in the glow of the small flashlight she left on.

“Now I don’t know anymore.”

He turned onto his side, moved closer to her. Their faces were only a hand’s breadth apart. He could smell the sweet scent of her shampoo, mixed with the smell of smoke and damp earth.

“Lea,” he said, and her name felt heavy in his mouth, like something he’d been carrying for too long.

She moved first. Her lips met his, soft and a little dry from the cold wind. It wasn’t a cautious kiss, no tentative getting to know each other. It was an opening, a yielding that set him on fire immediately. She pushed the blanket aside, and her hip pressed against his as she slid closer.

He placed his hand on the back of her neck, pulled her to him. Her mouth opened beneath his, and he felt her tongue, demanding and warm. The sleeping bag slipped lower, and the cool night air brushed over his bare forearms as she pushed up his sweatshirt.

“Take that off,” she murmured against his lips, her hands tugging impatiently at the fabric.

He sat up, and she followed him, pulling her own shirt over her head. Her breasts filled the tight space, their contours outlined in the faint light of the flashlight. She leaned forward, and her nipples grazed his chest as she pressed him back onto the mat.

“I’ve wanted this all week,” she confessed, her voice rough. “Every time you laughed, every time you put your hand on my shoulder, I thought: What if I just kiss you?”

“Why didn’t you?”

“Because I was afraid it would ruin everything. That you only want to be the friend who listens when I talk about Tim. About all that shit with Tim.” Her mouth wandered along his neck, and he felt her teeth, gently biting into his skin.

“Tim’s not here,” he said, and his hands found her back, sliding under the edge of her bra. “Tim is history.”

He felt her laughter against his skin. “That’s what I wanted to hear.”

She straightened up, sitting cross-legged on his hips. The flashlight’s beam cast shadows across her face, but her eyes glittered. She reached behind her back and undid the bra clasp, letting it fall. Her breasts swayed gently, and he placed his hands on them, feeling their weight, their warmth.

“You’re so beautiful,” he said, and it came out honestly, not like a rehearsed line.

Lea tilted her head, then leaned forward again, this time lower. Her lips found his nipples, her tongue circled them, and he suppressed a sound that was half groan, half curse. She worked her way down, her kisses growing wetter as she pulled his sweatshirt off completely and her hands fumbled at his pants.

“Lea,” he said warningly, but she shook her head.

“I want you in my mouth,” she said, and the words hit him straight in the gut. “I’ve been imagining this for days.”

She undid the button of his jeans, pulled the zipper down. He lifted his hips as she pulled down his pants along with his underwear, and then he was free, hard and wet at the tip. Her fingers wrapped around him, and she looked at him briefly before leaning in.

The first touch of her tongue made him gasp. She circled the head with her flat tongue, then took him deep into her mouth, so deep that he felt the tightness of her throat. Her hand gripped the shaft while her head moved in a rhythm that drove him to the edge of madness.

“That’s good,” he gasped. “Yes, just like that.”

She looked up at him as she kept working, her cheeks hollowed, her eyes dark. The sight was too much. He placed his hand in her hair, not to guide her, but to hold on to her as the waves crashed over him.

“Don’t stop,” she murmured, pulling away briefly to speak. “I want you to come.”

He groaned as she took him again, and this time he let go. His pelvis lifted, and she took everything, swallowed without hesitation, her throat working around him until his hands trembled and he sank onto the mat, exhausted.

Lea sat up, wiped her mouth with the back of her hand. Her smile was sly as she leaned over him and kissed him. He tasted himself on her tongue.

“Your turn,” he said, and turned her onto her back.

She lay beneath him, her skin almost golden in the dim light. He kissed her neck, her collarbones, the insides of her wrists. Her breaths quickened as he took her nipples between his lips, held them between his teeth, and tugged gently.

“Jonas,” she gasped, and her fingers dug into his shoulders.

He worked his way further down, opened the waistband of her jogging pants, pulled them down over her hips along with her underwear. She lifted her pelvis, helpful, and then she lay open before him, her pubic hair dark against the pale skin.

He ran his hand over her inner thighs, let his fingers come closer without touching her. Her breath caught.

“Please,” she whispered.

He lowered his head. The first kiss on her vulva was tender, almost questioning, but then he grew hungrier. His tongue found her clitoris, circled it, and her back arched. She pressed her thighs around his head, and he allowed it, dove deeper into her until her taste filled him.

“Yes, there, right there,” she moaned, and her hands tugged at his hair.

He slid two fingers into her while his tongue kept working, and felt her muscles clench around him. Her pelvis moved against his face, and he held her, let her ride until her first climax shook through her. She cried his name, her voice breaking, and her body trembled so hard that the tent swayed softly.

He crawled back up, his erection pressing against her belly. She opened her eyes, her pupils wide and hazy.

“I want you inside me,” she said. “Now.”

He needed no second invitation. He rose up, guided his tip to her wet opening, and pushed into her in one slow, deep stroke. She moaned, her hands finding his back, her heels digging into his buttocks.

“God, you feel so good,” he said, the words coming automatically, honestly.

She moved with him, her hips meeting every thrust, their gazes locked together. The tent was gone. The rain was gone. There was only their bodies turning around each other, their skin sticking together, their names whispered into the dark.

He slowed the motion, pulled back almost completely until only the tip remained inside her, and then thrust forward again, deeper this time, as if he wanted to bring her to a place no other word could reach.

“Don’t stop,” she said, her voice sharp with desire. “I’m close.”

He quickened, his hand sliding between their bodies, finding her clitoris, rubbing it with his thumb while he thrust into her. Her body tensed, and he felt her come, felt her inner muscles grip him and pulse, and that was enough to carry him over. He came inside her, their names layered over each other like two lines meeting.

They stayed lying there, entwined, until the tent made itself known again. The rain had softened, almost a whisper on the tent fabric.

Lea turned to him, laid her head on his chest. Her fingers played with the hairs on his stomach.

“What happens now?” she asked.

Jonas kissed the crown of her head. “We sleep. Tomorrow morning, when we wake up, we’ll see.”

“And if it rains again tomorrow?”

He laughed softly. “Then we stay here. I know a guy who has a second sleeping bag in the car.”

She lifted her head and looked at him, a smile in her eyes.

“You knew all evening that I left mine in the car.”

“Maybe.”

“You’re an idiot, Jonas.” But she laughed as she said it, and lay back down at his side.

The rain grew quieter until only occasional drops tapped against the tent fabric. Lea fell asleep first, her breath calm against his ribs. Jonas stayed awake a while longer, his gaze fixed on the dark tent roof.

Then he switched off the flashlight.